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Find your love.

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Literature Text

Love is life
and life is love.
Your voice rings
softly as a dove.
Life is love
and love is life.
You calm the panic,
soothe the strife.
Hate is death
and death is hate.
The mournful cries
come far too late.
Death is hate
and hate is death.
We succumb one day
to it's icy breath.
I had to take a break from homework for fear that I'd forget this. I like it! I don't usually write poems with fixed rhythms and rhyming words, (even "The Five Senses of Envy" doesn't have a completely structured rhythm) so this is kind of unusual for me.

What do you guys think of it? Does the rhythm make sense to you, or re there sections where it could be improved? What kind of impression did the poem leave on you? I would really appreciate any feedback you could give. Thank you!
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Juliah456's avatar
Your good at poetry :)
*the more you know*